#1
My band recently recorded this song for a friend's birthday. I'm pretty inexperienced when it comes to recording/mixing so any comments would be appreciated.
Thanks for listening

http://soundcloud.com/15minutesleft/porn-hospital
Quote by Next Hendrix
Walk in on your wife with another man.
Kill them both.
Go to prison in Louisiana.
Have conversation with the Devil.
Instant harmonica asskickery.
#2
Got the porn music feel throughout the entire song. Excellent feel. Vocals need to be louder in the mix. Hard to hear at times. Vocals are really good. I think the bass could be bigger, funkier, and more prominent. It's just thrown in the back. For this style of music, I would put the focus almost entirely on the rhythm section before the guitar tracks. Gotta have a standout groove. It's a must. Maybe throw some reverb/slight echo on the vocal track? It could add a whole lot more to the song. I really like this. Sweet lyrics.

Critique for critique?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1523148