#1
Here is a melancholic mystic song i just wrote:
http://soundcloud.com/kjartan-thorkildsen
What do you think of it? Im very happy for constructive criticm.
Remember to post link to your song, if you want C4C.
(Also read the discription of the song if you are going to complain about GP6).
#2
Critting as I listen. This is RSE with gp6? Not bad good progression. I might suggest changing it up a bit cause it does get a little repetitive and i just cant stand music that I can tell which not is coming next. @ 1:23 I would add a distorted guitar there to amp up the mood then drums to charge that tempo up man. @ 2:45 I would fade in that guitar lead instead of just starting the note full blown. That part would be great for drums to rhythmitize and keep it going. Generally I would work on the repetitiveness and add drums to not make it seem like im just waiting for something to drive the song.

Crit 4 Crit Please take a look at my song

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1524133
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#3
Quote by Jonathan Trejo
Critting as I listen. This is RSE with gp6? Not bad good progression. I might suggest changing it up a bit cause it does get a little repetitive and i just cant stand music that I can tell which not is coming next. @ 1:23 I would add a distorted guitar there to amp up the mood then drums to charge that tempo up man. @ 2:45 I would fade in that guitar lead instead of just starting the note full blown. That part would be great for drums to rhythmitize and keep it going. Generally I would work on the repetitiveness and add drums to not make it seem like im just waiting for something to drive the song.

Crit 4 Crit Please take a look at my song

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1524133

Thanks. I leaved a comment there. I did use rse too.
#5
Quote by aaron aardvark
Usernames sucks,
Parts of it reminds me of Bach or Beethoven for some strange reason. Sounds like a video game much of the time, which isn't a bad thing. I like most all of the melodies. Parts of it remind me of dub-step. Parts of it are pretty cool. Please review my music in this newer link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1522714

I posted a reply. About the bach thing, did you mean the climb up from 0.15-0.30? It modulates between alot of diffrent keys, but returns back to Cm (that it was to begin with).
#6
Usernames,
I accidently commented on "Original Progressive" on my first post (the quick arpeggios here & there sometimes remind me of Bach/Beethoven). Now I'm listening to "Melancholic": it sounds strange around 1:25, but otherwise sounds pleasant most of the time....though i think there is too much distortion on the the guitar at 2:20 & the song ending. Sounds interesting overall.
#7
Quote by aaron aardvark
Usernames,
I accidently commented on "Original Progressive" on my first post (the quick arpeggios here & there sometimes remind me of Bach/Beethoven). Now I'm listening to "Melancholic": it sounds strange around 1:25, but otherwise sounds pleasant most of the time....though i think there is too much distortion on the the guitar at 2:20 & the song ending. Sounds interesting overall.

Hehe, the part in 1:25 is changing between 15/16 and 4/4 or something
Anyway, the guitar might have to much distortion, but as i said, im going to record this professionaly later.
#8
This is beautiful. You've got quite an amount of skill. Very solid, and well-played. I hear classical influence at times, but the overall main melody is mesmerizing and gorgeous. I would have added an acoustic lead during the rhythm in the first half. Could add even more depth to the track. I love your electric tone. Very nice playing, but the electric lines just seem to be thrown into the track. They should be more prominent when the electric leads start; not just start-stop, start-stop.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1523148
#9
Great track! I don't think it's boring at all. Like the user before me said, mesmerizing. The song seems to wander around going to a lot of different places but ultimately returning where it started. Some lyrics would be great, although they shouldn't be too overpowering. The guitar leads seemed a little out of place to me.

Please crit mine: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1525032