#1
I couldn't find the old recordings thread (ive been gone a while) so I just put this here, Anyway I played all the guitar parts on this jam and would like to hear some tips on improving my improvisation, please give actual advice and not just say I suck, if you think it sucks tell me why


http://youtu.be/fqC_ByvwgpU
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#2
...Your name is John Johnson? Sweet jesus your parents are creative.
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#3
Deathcore sucks, therefore it sucks.
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#4
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...Your name is John Johnson? Sweet jesus your parents are creative.



I agree, that is why I go by "John Henry"
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#5
It's like all of the most boring of rock cliches came together and spawned an unholy bastard child.
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It's like all of the most boring of rock cliches came together and spawned an unholy bastard child.


I was going to say that.
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John Johnson, son of John Johnson.

Wouldn't he be John Johnsonson, son of John Johnson?

BTW, I listened to it and forgot I was listening to something about halfway through

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I agree, that is why I go by "John Henry"


Holy fuck that is fucking awesome.
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Wouldn't he be John Johnsonson, son of John Johnson?

BTW, I listened to it and forgot I was listening to something about halfway through

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#12
Can anyone actually give me advice on improving my improvising?
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#13
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Can anyone actually give me advice on improving my improvising?

no.

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#14
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Can anyone actually give me advice on improving my improvising?


For starters, try avoiding overusing so many hard rock cliches. Maybe if you listen to some different types of music you'll be inspired to diversify your licks. Try some celtic, country, jazz, polka, etc and listen to the phrasing and learn some good licks, instead of trying to play exactly like every hard rock guitarist from the 1980's.
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#15
as a fan of the 80s I actually really liked this, I would say try to find a more unique tone though, everyone has theirs.
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For starters, try avoiding overusing so many hard rock cliches. Maybe if you listen to some different types of music you'll be inspired to diversify your licks. Try some celtic, country, jazz, polka, etc and listen to the phrasing and learn some good licks, instead of trying to play exactly like every hard rock guitarist from the 1980's.

Agreed. It is one dimensional, and a little boring to listen to. Would be better with some vocals.