#1
Working on a Steve Vai-ish instrumental guitar song that I'm calling Peace and Warfare. This is about a third of what I have planned. I just wanted to see what everyone thought of the melody and whatnot. Here's the link.

http://soundcloud.com/phayzz/peace-and-warfare-wip2

Thanks for listening!
Last edited by phayzze at Mar 6, 2012,
#2
Drums are way too low in the mix. The strings(?) in the intro are too loud compared to the rest of the track. The guitar playing is alright, but could use a lot smoother tone and some delay. Good melody. Good ideas. Keep working at it and better yourself.

Crit for crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1523148