Writing as I read:
I liked the atmospheric piano part at the beginning, maybe the rain sounds were a bit much though! The synth line was pretty cool, as were the reverb-y drums. The bass sounds a little weak to me, but maybe that's just the style you were going for. I'm not usually into this kind of thing but it's got a really cool feel to it, I agree that it's pretty lonely sounding.
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