Nowhere near finished. but this is what I have so far, and wanted to see what others think thus far. Should I go on with this or take another approach?

I am wealth
It's my faith
Ignore the wale
At the gate
Ignore the screams
Feed the dogs

Beggar please
You disgust me
Fight for scraps
On the floor
May the dogs
Lick your sores

Ye 'Ole luxury
Achilles heal
Believe not what you see
But what you feel
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my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while

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Well, not really haha!

Last edited by popeye100 at Mar 8, 2012,