Writing as I listen:
Recording quality seems pretty solid, drums are mixed a little high but it's not too bad. Vocals sound a little nasal, has there been some weird EQ put on them or something?
Nice sound altogether, a kind of gritty pop-rock type sound. Could maybe use a bit more dynamic change between the verses and choruses. Guitar solo was great, loved the dirtiness of it (it'd sound awesome with a wah pedal on it).
Generally I liked the song, wasn't blown away with the vox but there was nothing wrong with them.
If you could check out any of the songs in my sig that would be sweet
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Always up for some C4C, been compared to Frank Turner, The Cure's Robert Smith and Bruce Springsteen so check out my stuff if you like the sound of that
yeah that wasnt the final mix, just an idea of what it will sound like. Thanks for the feedback!
I will have a looks at your songs =D