#1
Background: The purpose was to made it sound as a regular breakup song, but it has a much deeper thoughts in it, it's about how somebody you love so much (in my case, my dad) can leave you in just a second, promising their return though they never actually come back.


Must confess the cause of my crime
Can’t let go of any amount of time
Lies have led me to where I stand
Wrath has made me what I am

Write me a song and say that you’re done
Stop saying again and again you’re coming home
I can read you as an open book
All I need is to take a look

And I’ll cry once again for any aid
That can make me escape the beast you made
But I can’t seem to answer my own doubts
I trusted you too much and it was my entire fault

These scars have made me hold on
These poems have made me strong
I can’t see any trace of light
It must mean this isn’t my final fight

Write me a song and say that you’re done
Stop saying again and again you’re coming home
Keep telling me the reasons why you left
Make me believe this isn’t just another theft

And I’ll cry once again for any aid
That can make me escape the beast you made
But I can’t seem to answer my own doubts
I trusted you too much and it was my entire fault

You won’t feel anymore
Because there was never any feeling in you
You won’t hurt me again
I wish there was an exit for me too

And I’ll cry once again for any aid
That can make me escape the beast you made
But I can’t seem to answer my own doubts
I trusted you too much and it was my entire fault
Sorrow will lead me to my end
I don’t know if it will ever mend
Stop all you try to pretend
If you leave I won’t love you less
Last edited by OmegaWarbeast at Mar 9, 2012,
#3
This is damn good. Reminds me a little of Sonata Arctica, stylistically at least, which coming from me is a big compliment
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#4
sounds like a rap song.
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