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Hey guys. Here's some lyrics I wrote when I was 11ish.
They've been recently edited but the base of it all, I worte when I was 11.
Could you give me some feedback please?



Verse 1
They've ****ed you around for 20 odd years,
and you've just taken it in.
You just sat around for most of your life,
and you never gonna win.

Verse 2
You've been messed up for 20 odd years.
and now you are all alone.
There is a way to beat those kids,
that you have not been shown.

Pre-Chorus
How do you live you life,
knowing you are so weak?
You've got nothing left to lose.
So get away from this life you don't use.

Chorus
And the people who hurt you for 20 odd years,
are bringing out all of your fears.
Cause they've ruined your home, your life and your career,
they're beating your heart out now that your here.

(Interlude)
Verse 3
You've done nothing for 20 odd years,
you've just let them kick you around.
There is a path out of this life,
it just hasn't been found.

Pre Chorus
Chorus
(Interlude)
Verse 4
You need to do something with the rest of your life,
if you want to get them away.
Your gonna have to use all your strength,
if you don’t want them to stay.

Bridge
(Guitar Solo) [Chorus x2, Interlude]

Chorus
And the people who hurt you for 25 years,
are bringing out all of your fears.
Cause they've ruined your home, your life and your career,
they're beating your heart out now that your here.
And the people who hurt you for all of those years,
are now going to face their fears.
Cause they've ruined your home, your life and your career...
Now teach them a lesson, get them back in to gear.

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These are some more lyrics I recently wrote. I never got round to finishing them, but take a look at what I've got.


I’ll just put us out of our misery,
Goodbye and thanks for the memories.
Maybe one day I’ll realize what I’ve done,
It’s been great and we’ve had our fun.

I’m not gonna realize anything, anytime soon.
I don’t know it, but I’m hurting you too.
Don’t you miss the times,
When we were intertwined?
When you couldn’t help but smile,
when I was in the corner of your eye.

I can’t, I’m sorry, I know I’ll regret this.
I’m stuck at the bottom of our affectionate abyss.
Moving on it’s an apparent thing to do,
only if it’s not with you.