Not bad for being done in one take. All though making sure everything is in time with each other is pretty important for an instrumental song. I know what its like to be pushed for time though so I understand where your coming from. However next time I would turn the lead guitar up in the mix as it could be really hard to hear underneath all the other instruments at some points. Either way this was a good idea to wish John a happy birthday. Keep on pluggin man! If you would'nt mind doing a C4C I'd really appreciate any thoughts you could give me on any of the covers I've done. Theres a link to my YouTube channel in my sig if you feel inclined to