#1
I push back through thoughts,
of you
of me
How we began,
and how we used to be.
I go way back when
not here or now,
searching through what this heart will allow

So enchanting
yet so demeaning
how could you?
have you lost all feeling?
of course you have its obvious,
to your heart you locked me out.
I tried hard to go back through time
but with every chance you blocked me out.

I waited and waited
but no rescue came
when tomorrow comes
I will feel the same
you should realize this is no game
this is my heart
not an everlasting flame.
#2
Liked it, prefered the parts with shorter lines, end of the second verse got a bit wordy.
#3
Thanks for the input! I wrote this like four years ago, and i recently got re-inspired so now im gonna try to start writing again.