Would like some feedback on this. I've put a lot of effort into this, and I'm happy with the results, but seeing as I'm brand new to this kind of music (producing it, that is) I need criticism.


If you care for lyrics, they're in the description on SoundCloud. Could definitely use some feedback on that as well!

Hope it's tasty.
Please check out some of my original music and leave me a comment @ SoundCloud
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I like the intro phasey/flanger strings. Sounds rather 80's, which is fine by me. Kind of an odd drum beat at ~2:00, but I give you credit for doing something unusual/different. Amusing drum sounds around 3:45. The dub-step type (~4:20) stuff surprised me, in a good way. Not wild about the screaming vocals around 5:00, glad they're not very loud, but they are OK. I much prefer the melodic singing at ~5:40 (good!). Ending is a bit abrupt, but I like the song overall. Please review my music at this link:

Woah this is amazing. So many different sounds, but it still works somehow. It sounds like you really know what you're doing. I don't have any major critisms, it's just great!
I personally live the screaming vocals. A lot.
Following you on SC

I need to up my game a bit I think.

A quick listen?