#1
Open up the sky and swallow me whole
Freeze this moment in time, an everlasting home
Keep your valor ever-gliding in your wake
Always know that silver wings will never break

My friend and I wrote this for a post-rock project we're working on called Ingest the Cassette. We wanted to keep the lyrics minimal for this song as you can see, but anyway let me know what you think!
Here's the song, yo!
Write the music you want to hear.
#2
From the lyrics it sounds really good! I love it, but then I am a sucker for certain lyrics that has to do with life and ways of looking at it through other people's eyes. Especially the type that make u think, ya know. Its really cool, and would fit into a rock song well. Kinda Alice in Chainsy.

Live it Right, And Live it Wild.
~Musidore~