Rhythm is erratic, sounds kinda sloppy. Clean it up, make it tight and add vocals. This is a really poor song choice for not having vocals. I could do the same thing with a loop pedal and a drum track. The vocals are what sets this song apart.
Sounded good to me. I liked the guitar and the tones. The drums could be programmed a little simpler perhaps. Some of the fills did not seem to blend in right.