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"Lazarus"

V1:
I am wealth
It is my faith
Hear a wale
At my front gate
Beggar please
You disgust me

PC1:
You damned soul
I'll help you not
Turn away

C:
Ye 'ole luxury
Achilles heal
Believe not what you see
But what you feel

V2:
Pray for death
You sorry soul
Your disease
It sickens me
Fight for scraps
On my tile floor

PC2:
May the dogs
Spare your life
Lick your sores

C:
Ye 'ole luxury
Achilles heal
Believe not what you see
But what you feel

V3:
Beggar's dead
Off and away
I feel sick
Lay me in my... grave

B:
Tormented by this flame
Up through the smoke I can barely see
Abraham! Lazarus!
Lend some water, won't you please?
This flame is burning me
Wet my tounge! Quench my thrist!
Send word to my bretheren
(That's up to the Holy prophet)
Send Lazarus then;
They'll believe a dead man
(If not the prophet, they won't believe him!)

C2:
Ye 'ole luxury
Achilles heal
Believe not what you see
But what you feel
Underground sun
Up above
With Abraham
Is Lazarus!
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my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


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Last edited by popeye100 at Mar 20, 2012,
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Quote by cpt_pimp
my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


Quote by leg end
Well, not really haha!