Quote by AtTheGates\m/
C4C metal song tell me what you think of it

You definitely got some good riffs going here. I especially like the ones starting at measures 14 and 56. For the riff starting at measure 14, it might not be a bad idea to add a lead guitar either harmonizing that riff, or playing it in a higher octave. Aside from that, maybe work on getting the transitions a little smoother. Some of the riffs don't really feel like they flow as well as they could in and out of each other.


If you could crit this for me, I'd really appreciate it. Keep writing, man.