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Quote by AtTheGates\m/
C4C metal song tell me what you think of it

You definitely got some good riffs going here. I especially like the ones starting at measures 14 and 56. For the riff starting at measure 14, it might not be a bad idea to add a lead guitar either harmonizing that riff, or playing it in a higher octave. Aside from that, maybe work on getting the transitions a little smoother. Some of the riffs don't really feel like they flow as well as they could in and out of each other.


https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1526924

If you could crit this for me, I'd really appreciate it. Keep writing, man.