#1
New song that I've just posted to YouTube. It was written and recorded in one day, so the recording is the best, and it isn't mixed at all. Some parts may be 'generic metalcore', but I tried to make it slightly different. Anywho, some comments or ways in which the song could be better would be appreciated.

Thanks. And C4C.

Original Metalcore
#2
I paused a Tosin Abasi video for this so this better be good.

Edit: It was good, considering it was in one day, but I don't like that the first half of the song is a breakdown lol, there is really two but might as well be one.
Last edited by Who Sh0t Ya HxO at Mar 17, 2012,
#3
Quote by Who Sh0t Ya HxO
I paused a Tosin Abasi video for this so this better be good.

Edit: It was good, considering it was in one day, but I don't like that the first half of the song is a breakdown lol, there is really two but might as well be one.

Yeah, I'm going to change that. Or add something to make it more interesting. Thanks for listening though
#4
Don't get me wrong, I like breakdowns, but I usually picture them in the middle or near the end of the song and it's only usually only one.