#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zn_8fbDBrOI

Me and a friend made this about a year ago. Just a quick song we threw together in a couple hours. The singer is not in any way a singer and has no experience we were just messing around and made this song.

Constructive criticism wanted! Let me know what I can do better with the mixing and also how the singer can improve his vocals in any way.

Thanks! Will C4C.
#2
Singing isn't great, as you've said, and I'm not sure about the lyrics. Nice riffage though, could sound really cool with a better singer, plenty of potential. The 'Stacey's Mom' reference was pretty funny. Sounds like you did the song for fun, and fun is what comes through, which is never a bad thing
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