it's not bad, Sounds like it's strait from the 80s though :p
It's over simplified, So what!

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Pretty solid. Straighten out the fills. Make sure there's not too much going on in them. The snare fills feel forced and cluttered. Simple works just as well. The third one is an improvement. I would make them more like that. They can be short too. To fit with the song, I wouldn't have any fill last more than a measure.

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