Cool chord progression, the odd dash of dissonance really worked. You could definitely work something really great around this. I would personally keep the instrumentation pretty minimal, but it might work with a larger, band sound. But yeah, this could be fantastic when you've finished it, nice one
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This is pretty sweet man. I think it could really benefit from having one other instrument (Maybe slide guitar?) I picture this being in a movie for like a dream shot or something. I really dig it man cool chords. Send me a link when you get it all finished!

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1528269
Originally Posted by JAHellraiser
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The playing, melodies, chord arrangements sound beautiful, but for the tone, i'd say a richer (and somewhat brighter) tone would make this stand out a bit more. Lots of potential here. I'd love to hear a finished version. Let me know when you do.