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My band is called Netherwind. We're a metal/metalcore band that tries to not sound completely cookie cutter from New York State.

New song recorded in one of our practice spaces. Not a great quality but I'm wondering what people think of the song itself.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gghfq8qR_Cc&feature=plcp&context=C4d241e1VDvjVQa1PpcFNQQKTe0mKMEnoFNVNgX03Xn_Bl6PPTOEQ%3D

We have a youtube channel that the video above is on, but it only has a few rough recordings and some from our first show which didn't go that great (we've gotten better)

Here is our facebook

http://www.facebook.com/NetherwindBand?sk=app_2405167945

We don't have much up, unfortunately. We're looking for ways to record our first EP, but hey, I'm just promoting at this point.

I'm the guy with the white guitar and longer hair by the way.
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How was Confucius death metal?
You've clearly never read any Confuscius.

As I wait on the edge of the earth,
I can see the walls being torn down again
Only to be rebuilt in another name,
On a different day
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Your vocalist sounds like he's a grindcore singer xP i like him.
but I think that you need to change the chords at the start.
they're pretty average and cliche, but a good melody could change that.
also tell your drummer to get more cymbals. that china gets annoying.
Or change your drummer. he is very bad. he went out of time far too many times.
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Your vocalist sounds like he's a grindcore singer xP i like him.
but I think that you need to change the chords at the start.
they're pretty average and cliche, but a good melody could change that.
also tell your drummer to get more cymbals. that china gets annoying.
Or change your drummer. he is very bad. he went out of time far too many times.

Yeah I love our vocalist, he's my best friend haha. He's gonna do more rough yell-singing too so he can have better breath support.
Thank you for the critiquing! I like the chords going under the vocals but in the beginning we may change the riff up a bit. And our drummer isn't bad, we legit put that song together that day, we only ran it once before recording it. Plus he's a good friend and one of the better drummers around my town. Also he was using a smaller kit than he usually does :P

Thanks for the observations and comments!
Quote by willT08
Quote by HowSoonisNow
How was Confucius death metal?
You've clearly never read any Confuscius.

As I wait on the edge of the earth,
I can see the walls being torn down again
Only to be rebuilt in another name,
On a different day