#1
Hey all,
I just finished working on the first track of the album I'll be working on from now until summer's end. It's titled "Jaded" and this song describes the impact of letting go a passion in order to make money. The song only features acoustic guitar, and vocals, as will the rest of the album. Future albums (once I get a serious band) will include drums, bass, and electric guitar (which is where I started, and feel most comfortable).
The album (as of now) will be called "The Bridge Sessions" and more on that to come soon.

This is my first serious attempt at singing/lyrics, and constructive criticism is always accepted. I'd love to hear what you think!

The track can be found under the music section of my Facebook page:
http://www.facebook.com/MOImusic

Or on my SoudCloud page:
http://soundcloud.com/cyerinides/jaded

If you actually like it, please do so on facebook!

Thanks, and I hope you enjoy it!
-Chris
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#3
Thanks a lot! I'm not much of a singer at all, as I said, it was my first real attempt. I plan on taking some lessons soon as well as practicing more. In the end, it's the passion that I'm worried about, and if people can feel that, then I'm pleased!

Thanks again, and I'm gonna check you out right now.
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You are amazing. The fact that you have paramore next to disturbed shows how awesome you are.
Here, an awesome medal. It's made out of awesomnite.
:extends medal:


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Thank you!
I would give you an awesome metal, but
I can't find any awesomnite.
#4
This sounded great caught my attention. Your voice compliments the guitar and works well with it xD @50 seconds The way you overlayed the guitars is amazing. I haven't heard of that sound in a long time. I would work on the vocals cause it does get a little monotone but other then that the guitars and the mix sounded amazing.

Crit 4 Crit !

Please check out my thread and gimme some feed back on my demos

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1528750

Thnx
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