#2
i seriously love your song. keep up the good work
But I won't let you sit by
So call in the kids
Alone, you can't make amends
Now I won't let you sit by
But so call in the kids
Now that's enough with this f*cking incense
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Interpol - Mammoth
#3
thanks dude!
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Motion City Soundtrack, Get Up Kids, Jimmy Eat World, Transit, Brand New, Dashboard Confessional, Early November, Fall Out Boy, Jawbreaker, Polar Bear Club, The Story So Far, the Wonder Years, Something Corporate.
#4
this song is awesome! especially the lyrics... they're incredible. very well written song, i'd love to hear more!
#5
Great song, great songwriting too, sounds a little Blink 182ish at times, the lyrics are good too.

My only problem with it is that the vocals need to be turned up a little, and everything else turned down. Maybe it's just my system.

Overall, enjoyed the song, generic pop-punk, but still good.
#6
Quote by overitunderit
this song is awesome! especially the lyrics... they're incredible. very well written song, i'd love to hear more!


thanks dude! i have 3 songs up now at http://facebook.com/adelosband and i'll be posting more in the next few weeks.

Quote by King Turi
Great song, great songwriting too, sounds a little Blink 182ish at times, the lyrics are good too.

My only problem with it is that the vocals need to be turned up a little, and everything else turned down. Maybe it's just my system.

Overall, enjoyed the song, generic pop-punk, but still good.


yeah, the vocals are a bit low. my mistake on that one haha.
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#7
Very good singing, lyrics were very good too. Good songwriting. Reminds me of the band "Brand New". Guitar work was good and tasteful. Mixing was great aswell. The only thing I noticed is that the ending seemed a little abrupt, a nice guitar lead and a bridge would work well for a song like this. Very professional sounding recording otherwise, good work.


When you have a moment check out my song here https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1530214
#9
i'll try to C4C soon. thanks guys!
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Motion City Soundtrack, Get Up Kids, Jimmy Eat World, Transit, Brand New, Dashboard Confessional, Early November, Fall Out Boy, Jawbreaker, Polar Bear Club, The Story So Far, the Wonder Years, Something Corporate.