I'm always a fan of DnB xD What was your inspiration for this song? I would introduce a lead cause it does get a little repetitive and I could blame the genre for that but then again for me I lose interest in repetitive music cause it doesn't grasp my attention for the full duration of the song. The ooo/em got annoying but I can see it working with a lead or with a new riff if possible. The bass in the song didn't seem to move as much so I would morph it and modulate it. I know this isn't suppose to be dubstep but that would intrigue me. Please take whatever I say with a grain of salt. I'm honest with my opinions and I wont beat around the bush. Overall the mix sounded great just need to work on the composition.

Crit 4 Crit!

Please check out my thread and leave some feed back on my demos


Click My Library to see what I've written

My Library
Last edited by Jonathan Trejo at Mar 25, 2012,
Thanks dude and you are right. My other songs focus more on bass lines, this was just me playing with a new style. I'll go check out your stuff now.