#1
Hey everyone,

I just put out a new song called "Make Me Shiver". This one took a while to make, but I'm happy with how it came out.

Here's the link: http://soundcloud.com/oneunknownmusic/make-me-shiver

Let me know what you think!


Thanks in advance!
The first question I ask myself when something doesn't seem to be beautiful is why do I think it's not beautiful. And very shortly you discover that there is no reason.-John Cage
#2
Hard work man. This sounds superb. Really amazing piece of music. Vocals are interesting and catchy. The beginning sounded a little dark with the ambient piano. When the drums came in sounded happy My favorite part is the lyric " The Sun, The Sun Etc.." that caught my ear. The composition and the overall mix. I can't say anything bad about it. It's really solid in my opinion. Everything works well together like the instruments are talking to each other. Great work.

Crit 4 Crit! I didn't see a sign up but I thought it wouldn't hurt to ask.

Please check out my thread and leave some feedback on my demos

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1528750

Thnx!
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#3
Hey thanks a lot for the nice words!

Yeah I'll crit your stuff.

Oh, if any of you guys like the song, you guys should consider checking out our facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/pages/One-Unknown/279174105485006
The first question I ask myself when something doesn't seem to be beautiful is why do I think it's not beautiful. And very shortly you discover that there is no reason.-John Cage