#1
Hi everyone, i'm spanish and I ask you for some help with my english expressions, I obviously accep any constructive criticism, thanks!

Feel those blue smurfs hiking your shanks,
could be jealousy, or maybe anger,
I become warm-blooded and no reason on my being,
talking rubbish with strangers, blending dissenting views,
you are asking too much for me, but this puppy love, oh this puppy love.

sudden body movements and a nervous laugh hard to control,
some downtime is what I need to unplug myself, but, really?
oh my puppy love, i'm hooked as you as my cocaine.

Don't be cross with me, just cracking jokes,
could be frivolous, or maybe roar of laugher,
a wingless angel who found her way on me,
a wingless angel who gave her way to me,
I toil on it and I find it very hard, but this puppy love, oh this puppy love.

sudden body movements and a nervous laugh hard to control,
some downtime is what I need to unplug myself, but, really?
oh my puppy love, i'm hooked as you as my cocaine.

It's the road we (i) choose,
will it take us anywhere?
I will work at our stake,
obvious answer,
every minute far away (without you) is like having number 423 (four two three) while queuing.

sudden body movements and a nervous laugh hard to control,
some downtime is what I need to unplug myself, but, really?
oh my puppy love, i'm hooked as you as my cocaine.
Last edited by Pab21 at Mar 30, 2012,
#4
Quote by Pab21
Don't know how to take it xD but thanks for reading!

Pretty sure Mairipox is an adbot. They've become more tenacious lately.

Anyway, pretty well done. You make a few drug references. I'm curious. Is the object of your "puppy love" a metaphorical person? Or is it a metaphorical drug habit?
Last edited by crazysam23_Atax at Mar 30, 2012,
#5
Quote by crazysam23_Atax
Pretty sure Mairipox is an adbot. They've become more tenacious lately.

Anyway, pretty well done. You make a few drug references. I'm curious. Is the object of your "puppy love" a metaphorical person? Or is it a metaphorical drug habit?


It's about a person... maybe a strange relationship, "i hate but i love you", dont know hot to explain
#9
Quote by Pab21
what does "adbot" mean?
It's a program (hence why it's called a "bot", which is short for robot) that submits ads (short for advertisements) to websites. So, basically, someone sets up an account and then they set up a program that posts the ads for them. It's technically a forming of computer hacking, and (as a Computer Science student) it annoys me.