#1
First of all the sound is pretty bad because It's through my laptop mic as I don't actually own any recording equipment...

Secondly I only played along to the tracks once before recording..

First of all is my bluesy improv in B minor

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=95u7QcPNMkM

Second is my metal shred in E minor

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M-lVWkAibK4&feature=relmfu

give me your criticisms please to help me improve
#2
the blues one just sounded like you were playing random notes. Try learning licks and throwing them in there. The metal one was pretty good although I felt like you used to many runs and stuff try throwing some catchy melodies or something in there. Some thing that really sticks out
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#3
Maybe in Original recordings?

This forum is for discussing recording technique, gear, etc.

CT
Could I get some more talent in the monitors, please?

I know it sounds crazy, but try to learn to inhale your voice. www.thebelcantotechnique.com

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