First of all the sound is pretty bad because It's through my laptop mic as I don't actually own any recording equipment...

Secondly I only played along to the tracks once before recording..

First of all is my bluesy improv in B minor


Second is my metal shred in E minor


give me your criticisms please to help me improve
the blues one just sounded like you were playing random notes. Try learning licks and throwing them in there. The metal one was pretty good although I felt like you used to many runs and stuff try throwing some catchy melodies or something in there. Some thing that really sticks out
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Maybe in Original recordings?

This forum is for discussing recording technique, gear, etc.

Could I get some more talent in the monitors, please?

I know it sounds crazy, but try to learn to inhale your voice. www.thebelcantotechnique.com

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