#3
okay just listened to more of your stuff i am totally following you you are great
#4
Crit as I write. I like the way that the guitar line is played, a little bossa nova-ish. I can imagine listening to it by a pool in hawaii. The sounds a lovely or rather the ideas are and I think that with better recording you could be onto somehting really nice here. The song itself 8/10, close to a 9.

Production really lets it down though but this is probably due to home recording/financial implications so I will disgregard that element of it and stick with an 8/10. Very well thought out and lovely mood.

Crit mine? Any of the songs on this solo E.P www.facebook.com/dirtyworksmusic

Cheers dude
Gibson SG (Heavily modded)
Fender USA Strat
Hohner 12 String-uber rare

Fender Silverface Twin

EHX Big Muff
Digitech badmonkey overdrive
Boss DS-1
Blackstar Distortion X
Dunlop Crybaby
Ibanez Delay
Digitech Whammy
#5
^^Also, listening to your other stuff........you need to get into a studio with this stuff. Its very very good! I wish you all the best sir.
Gibson SG (Heavily modded)
Fender USA Strat
Hohner 12 String-uber rare

Fender Silverface Twin

EHX Big Muff
Digitech badmonkey overdrive
Boss DS-1
Blackstar Distortion X
Dunlop Crybaby
Ibanez Delay
Digitech Whammy