#1
I've got a rather cheap setup and I'm wondering if it shows. I suppose the lyrics aren't very clever and neither is the music but does the recording quality sound alright? I promise my poor writing ability will not bring a tear to your eye, but I'm not promising a masterpiece.

I've no idea what else to add to this. Constructive criticism would be nice.

Hopefully I've posted this properly...

http://soundcloud.com/e-mcawesome/first-date

There's the link... I'm looking at putting up some other stuff in time...

Thanks ahead of time for any critiques.
#2
i'll be honest. your writing kinda sucks, but whatever. i hope you're not a singer, but yeah the instrumental's quality could be way better, partially because of the gear used to record and actual producing and mixing skills. the recording and producing of the voice it's kinda weird, but just keep practicing, you'll get it some time