#1
Realized how long t's been since I actually wrote something! This may be the prime example of writer's block.

VERSE 1:
Broken off
Lost again
I can't find out
Where I am

I'm losing time
Every day
To cross the line
To fly away

From you
To fly away from you

CHORUS:
Fortified
Borderlines
Blocked you away
from my mind

Break it down
Tear it up
You'll never get
close enough


VERSE 2:
Beaten down
Run away
Cast aside
Led astray

Fighting off
In my mind
The demons you
Have confined

In me
Have confined in me

[CHORUS]

BRIDGE:
Beaten senseless
Pain in excess
No more progress
Life in distress

Hear my protest
Start to regress
Feelings suppressed
Will be expressed

[CHORUS]

OUTRO:
Close enough
Close enough
Close enough.

I'm stepping out of my normal punk genre into emo with this one, but I think it came out good. This was an oldie I dug up and fixed.
#2
I find it pretty cool, somehow I connect it to the rythm of Longview - Green Day. Maybe a little bit of old school Black Flag there. I really have nothing to add.
#3
Quote by chargerbandit
I find it pretty cool, somehow I connect it to the rythm of Longview - Green Day. Maybe a little bit of old school Black Flag there. I really have nothing to add.

I like Green Day, so that's quite the compliment for me. However I was more aiming for a Chevelle or Filter kind of sound.