#1
Were wet clothes bothering you? or blue
moths puddled to the pond's mouth sank
beneath the stomp of canvas shoes; drying.

don blue a long the rows the maze the spiral,
past the snake the scribble the crown the crawl
and because our bones like communities or building
scaffolding keep growing we make an effort for boats
riding them through the highway exits past the water
towers, striped like sweaters, so soaked in soft steps
or a physical skin, letting pockets out and wearing
exhaustion like hurried hands, shaking from
left out ambullican ghast warship hautewurk
providence, cheeks.
exposure laaaately nor
droawning.
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#2
This is excellent. I really like this.

left out ambullican ghast warship hautewurk
providence, cheeks.
exposure laaaately nor
droawning.

These four lines in particular reveal some interesting imagery.