Metal? How is it anything like the same genre as what I'd call metal? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U__m4N7Ml30&ob=av2n

Anyhow, what you got is two dudes messing about in front of a webcam - one a mediocre guitarist and the other suffering a bad case of indigestion. 0:45 to 0:59 is hilariously bad. My honest opinion? Change what you're doing or give up. AT least make it a bit more listenable, if not more original.
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I want to try that while playing the opening riff to "Tempting Time".

0-0-0-13-0-0-0-0-13 or something like that alalalala but It;s so heavy and off time and awesome and you could not f**k anyone to it.

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burzum IS nazi. well, varg is.