#1
There are lot's of "Rate the above", but I thought this one would be kinda helpful. I know there is already a place for you to put lyrics and have them reviewed, but this is supposed to be a bit more streamlined. Just post your initial reaction to the lyrics, 1-10, and some criticism if you want, and then post your own. Let's see how this goes..
Keep you doped with religion and sex and TV
And you think you're so clever and class less and free
But you're still fucking peasants as far as I can see

A working class hero is something to be.
#3
10/10 You sir are a lyrical genius.

Slamming an axe into the face,
Blood and gray matter all over the place.
Hacked to pieces, guts all over the floor,
Inhuman display of carnage and gore.

Viscera scattered and strewn about,
The chainsaw's roar drowns the victim's shouts.
The corpse will be devoured by vermin,
Baptized in blood, unholy sermon.

Cutting into the intestines,
Fecal matter everywhere.
Continue to cut away,
without even the slightest care.

Liver, kidneys, heart, and spleen,
Internal organs, brown, pink, and green.
Heaped in a pile up to the ceiling,
Nothing in the world can match this feeling.

Splattered blood stains the walls,
As the victims lay shattered and sprawled,
Out on the floor, screaming in pain,
Desperately yelling for help, in vain.

Rapid suppuration,
Untimely expiration,
Festering purulence,
Unprecedented violence.

Sexual thrill,
Evoked by the kill,
Mutilate at leisure,
For carnal pleasure.

Fetid stench,
Ichor drenced,
Effluvium reeks,
As orgasm peeks.
There's no such thing; there never was. Where I am going you cannot follow me now.
#4
10/10 fucking fantastic


I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
I'ma fuck a white bitch
2013 #5 Uger
2012 #7 Uger

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#5
8/10

You a stupid hoe, you a, you a stupid hoe
You a stupid hoe, you a, you a stupid hoe
You a stupid hoe, you a, you a stupid hoe
You a stupid hoe, (yeah) you a, you a stupid hoe.
To be vulnerable is needed most of all, if you intend to truly fall apart.


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#7
7.9105124084453024623/10

Fuck the police!
Fuck the police!
Fuck the police!
Fuck the police!
Fuck the police!
#8
EDIT: sorry mate - 4. Its been heard somewhere...

this is my song called: "If ernie were a stereotypical black man instead of a puppet"

pullin bitches in the tub
chilling to dub
ladies out the back goin
rub a dub dub
duckie's going craaayzaaay
got violated by a laaydaaay
so he crack dat bitch right in the face before she called the police and had him arrested for assault, then six months later was found guilty and sentenced to five years in jail. stay in school, fools.
Last edited by Spaztikko at Apr 9, 2012,
#9
Quote by Spaztikko
this is my song called: "If ernie were a stereotypical black man instead of a puppet"

pullin bitches in the tub
chilling to dub
ladies out the back goin
rub a dub dub
duckie's going craaayzaaay
got violated by a laaydaaay
so he crack dat bitch right in the face before she called the police and had him arrested for assault, then six months later was found guilty and sentenced to five years in jail. stay in school, fools.


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#10
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10/10 - fuck the police!

words in my head,
birds in my bed;
wherefore this laughter
back from the dead?
o! blooming tree,
let me hold thee!
no tantalus, i;
yr. branches high
let me reach;
I eat yr. peach
and am sated,
resuscitated.
carrion crow above my head
circle no more! i'm not yet dead
#11
Quote by neidnarb11890
10/10 - fuck the police!

words in my head,
birds in my bed;
wherefore this laughter
back from the dead?
o! blooming tree,
let me hold thee!
no tantalus, i;
yr. branches high
let me reach;
I eat yr. peach
and am sated,
resuscitated.
carrion crow above my head
circle no more! i'm not yet dead



Really gay. 2/10.