Gonna crit as I write. Pretty NIN intro. Synth sounds fat too. Nicely done. I like the odd choice of chords, it seems to be pretty simple yet there is something that makes it stand out, I think its the 2nd synth. The higher pitched things and the theramin sounding thing are also really cool. It seems like one of the Movie soundtrack works that NIN would do. Piano is odd to say the least but it works really well. I like the disjointed feel of this, atmospheric and out there for sure. Very Industrial feel, more so than dance orientated (dubstep etc) I like it a lot man.

Atmospherics 8/10
Structure 9/10 (as its weird and I like that)

This will not be for everyone, sort of an acquired taste but I like it a lot. Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1530975 there is a link to the FB and Twitter on there also, would be great for you to share it. Cheers man

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