#1
Out the window, subtle gaze,
There shines the moon, a reddish haze,
Is it for the blood that’s spilled,
A screech that penetrates, sharp and shrill.
Into the blackness, stale and stolen.
What daemons did this ? Bael or Belial?

A banshee long forgotten,
Marks it’s way through forlorn tracks,
Through ancients Oaks and ancient fens,
Exists as blackened parallax.

Who’s spirit is this ?
That cries in piercing lisps.
Why so keen on revenge,
A twisted tortured mind now bent.
Who did this to you ?

A silence once serene,
Is deceased, an unnamed neé,
Reading out, not as it seems,
In phantom phantasmagorical beams.

Perdition.
Subscripture, scripture.
Inquisition.
Look deep into the pictures.

Did they call before they came ?
With their cross and with their pitchforks.
Did they call before they killed you ?
They killed you alright. Maniac’s last resort.

Well they said you had some demons,
And their daddy wasn’t happy.
No more daughters, no more sons, they said.
As the fire started crackling.

The fire grew and grew,
Until human left no more,
They checked it through and through,
An unnamed witch left bound to lore.

She was evil, so she perished,
Welcomed homed into that parish
In the sky, ever so high,
‘The Demons, oh so famished!’

Perdition.
They read the gospel as she burnt.
Inquisition.
Does fire to a demon hurt ?

A silence once serene,
Is deceased, an unnamed neé,
Reading out, not as it seems,
In phantom phantasmagorical beams.
Well they danced around the fire,
Laughed and sung foreboding cansos,
Sent that bitch where she belonged.

Belial and Legion, reaching
Out for help, reprise,
‘Oh Satan must be seething,
All his best devil’s have died’

What we did was right,
To each we say,
Confirm our faith,
Our rightful claim.

Perdition.
Subscripture, scripture.
Inquisition.
Look deep into the pictures.
We cast that shitstain out.
With our pitchforks and our crosses.
In victory we shout.
‘In Ri Jesu’ and mourn our losses.
#2
That's actually very good, but two things...

1. The title is ****ing hilarious.

2. Question marks go directly after a word, there should be no space between the word and the question mark. E.g. 'how?' as opposed to 'how ?'

Just my humble observations.
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#3
Quote by AgentOrange...
That's actually very good, but two things...

1. The title is ****ing hilarious.

2. Question marks go directly after a word, there should be no space between the word and the question mark. E.g. 'how?' as opposed to 'how ?'

Just my humble observations.


About the title That's deliberate.

And yeah, that's a terrible habit of mine. Thanks for pointing it out.