#1
on the week my heart started beating faster
i told my brain that my body could not know when i would die

but every day i woke up sweating
a pounding in my chest two beats faster
moon coddled by a nursing serpant
hanging upside down inside the heavens
i could see it clearly in the dawn

on the week god killed me i knew gods son
was in me, we were one
and as i let myself float the river pyre
every souless face down in the water
smiled and i smiled back
to back against the growing fire
consumed me i was breathing lightly
as the exhale of a magpie song

twenty two years drawn by a child
i could see it clearly in the dawn
a cherry tree, blossoms electric
my body knew when i would die
#2
It feels like the form is taking away from this, somewhat.
マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching

#4
Quote by #1 synth
on the week my heart started beating faster
i told my brain that my body could not know when i would die

but every day i woke up sweating,
a pounding in my chest two beats faster
moon coddled by a nursing serpant
hanging upside down inside the heavens,i could see it clearly in the dawn.
on the week god killed me i knew gods son
was in me, we were one;
and as i let myself float the river pyre
every souless face down in the water
smiled. and i smiled back
to back against the growing fire.
it consumed me and i was breathing lightly
as the exhale of a magpie song

twenty two years drawn by a child
i could see it clearly in the dawn.
a cherry tree, blossoms electric
my body knew when i would die


Absolutely lovely. I had some issues with punctuation, though, and added some in which I thought would be appropriate, and helpful.
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i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
#5
mmmmmmm so scrumptious
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