#1
Hey guys, I finished this the other day. It's kind of a djenty/thrash metal sort of piece, quite technical but with some groove! Hope you enjoy it, and I'd appreciate any tips and comments that can help me improve my writing!

Of course, I'd be glad to crit anything of yours in return.

Please use RSE if you can.
Attachments:
The Electric Lightbulb.gp5
The Electric Lightbulb.gpx
My stuff


Gibson Les Paul Studio
Ibanez ADC120
Tanglewood TGRF VS
Blackstar HT20
Roland Micro Cube
#2
I really liked a lot of riffs, but it'll be hard for me to judge the full song, especially a djent song, until you figure out how to write drum parts.
#3
Quote by Macabre_Turtle
I really liked a lot of riffs, but it'll be hard for me to judge the full song, especially a djent song, until you figure out how to write drum parts.

Aha, okay! I'm not a drummer, so I don't really know much about how they work. Can you give me any advice?
My stuff


Gibson Les Paul Studio
Ibanez ADC120
Tanglewood TGRF VS
Blackstar HT20
Roland Micro Cube
#4
Quote by lfcagger
Aha, okay! I'm not a drummer, so I don't really know much about how they work. Can you give me any advice?


Just open guitar pro files from your favorite bands and analyze what their drummers are doing.
#5
Quote by Macabre_Turtle
Just open guitar pro files from your favorite bands and analyze what their drummers are doing.

Okay, thank you! I'll do that. Anything you'd like me to crit?
My stuff


Gibson Les Paul Studio
Ibanez ADC120
Tanglewood TGRF VS
Blackstar HT20
Roland Micro Cube
#6
Quote by lfcagger
Okay, thank you! I'll do that. Anything you'd like me to crit?


No thanks. I haven't uploaded anything here in a long time.