yeah you better re-record it xD
nice try tho
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i'm out of my mind, insane, and what i say is sht or doesn't make sense, still your reading this.
I'd re-record as well, because of the timing. You've got the notes down, but it's just the timing that's a bit off. I'm pretty sure you can do better though, so I'd try that!
Tell me who's that writin'...