Sean Ashe
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Join date: Jul 2011
55 IQ
#2
I've never heard this before man, but some constructive criticism:

With your vibrato, try practicing it slow so it's 'even'. By even I mean you're equally abusing the fretted note and it's consistent in motion. That will make your vibrato sound MUCH more mature in comparison to others. Also I think if you worked on your phrasing a bit, it could really make this song go from a great job to a fantastic job. You have the timing, but it's almost too robotic. and Phrasing can really help w/ that.

Keep it up though

C4C https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1555823
ankthebank
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Join date: May 2009
2,924 IQ
#3
Quote by Sean Ashe
I've never heard this before man, but some constructive criticism:

With your vibrato, try practicing it slow so it's 'even'. By even I mean you're equally abusing the fretted note and it's consistent in motion. That will make your vibrato sound MUCH more mature in comparison to others. Also I think if you worked on your phrasing a bit, it could really make this song go from a great job to a fantastic job. You have the timing, but it's almost too robotic. and Phrasing can really help w/ that.

Keep it up though

C4C https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1555823



Hey buddy, I've checked yours out and have commented on your thread... it ROCKS!
Will take your advice on board, cheers!
CasseToi
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Join date: Aug 2012
123 IQ
#4
damn, i was expecting some crazy over the top bollywood-esque cover, but i really dug your cover dude
from a quick listen, i'm your playing in b minor or c minor or something close to that: i love that dude
i'm not quite sure if you're covering the vocal line or the overall melody, but it's 2 minutes to midnight for me, and it totally sounds killer
i'm glad you recorded this with some good software, i dig clean recordings dude
anyways, i only got praises for you right now

c4c? right this way my good sir!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1555399
ankthebank
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Join date: May 2009
2,924 IQ
#5
Quote by CasseToi
damn, i was expecting some crazy over the top bollywood-esque cover, but i really dug your cover dude
from a quick listen, i'm your playing in b minor or c minor or something close to that: i love that dude
i'm not quite sure if you're covering the vocal line or the overall melody, but it's 2 minutes to midnight for me, and it totally sounds killer
i'm glad you recorded this with some good software, i dig clean recordings dude
anyways, i only got praises for you right now

c4c? right this way my good sir!
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1555399



I think I will do some over the top bollywood stuff next time, just for fun! aha

Cheers, I've commented on yours as well
onemetalhead92
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Join date: Apr 2011
1,118 IQ
#8
1st time to see a hindi song on guitar actually but this was good

the sound quality was fine but it could be better i guess ... try to work on vibrato while bending and give ur vibrato a wider range

i liked the music itself alot
well done (Y)

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