pielover375
Unregistered User
Join date: Dec 2007
860 IQ
#1
Everyone who's ever had a buddy date your ex girlfriend knows what I'm talking about.

"Jimmy, I was there first"

G-D-C

Well Jimmy, I'll do you a solid Yeah you can talk to this girl.
But before you get started, Just know she was my world.
And just because I had to leave her all alone,
Well, Jimmy, listen to this song.

Well, Jimmy, yeah you know it, That was I say is true.
I'm gonna look into your eyes and say I'm sorry for you
I said that chick was crazy, Not just in the bed,
I said well she's real ****ed up, I'm talking in the head.

Jimmy, you know what I say is true
And Jimmy yeah I say that I feel bad for you
Cos when it's all said and done, well you're off worse
And Jimmy just remember that I… well I was there first.

When you go to her house, lay down there on her bed,
And when you hold her in your arms or kiss her head
Just remember I was there before you!
Kissin lips and pulling hair and playing just like you

Jimmy, you know what I say is true
And Jimmy yeah I say that I feel bad for you
Cos when it's all said and done, well you're off worse
And Jimmy just remember that I… well I was there first.

I was kissing what your kissing, I was holding what you hold
I was licking every where on her, That's the story that she told.
And Jimmy, you know, when you slip inside,
Keep in the back of your head it was me that made it wide.

So go up wash your face, and brush your teeth.
Maybe tonight's the night she won't think of me.
Well Jimmy I doubt it, because I am the man
Don't think she would forget me given that she can.

Jimmy, you know what I say is true
And Jimmy yeah I say that I feel bad for you
Cos when it's all said and done, well you're off worse
And Jimmy just remember that I… well I was there first.
Mr.Pink101
Ribbed for her pleasure
Join date: Feb 2008
1,508 IQ
#2
"Keep in the back of your head it was me that made it wide."

I couldn't take it seriously because of all the "Well"s and "Yeah"s, that vulgarity destroyed any hope left in this piece for me.
Just because you're writing about this topic, doesn't mean you don't have to add some subtlety to it.
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