UG's undercover CIA op.
Join date: Sep 2009
957 IQ
A black ring,
hanging on the words of an angered queen
sits the king.
His clubs won't kill,
his hearts won't heal,
his diamonds aren't worth a dime.
But with his spades,
he's digging himself a grave.

Though he thought
as he played a stacked deck
That he'd never regret
his "all-in" call.

Needless to say this is a heavy reference to a deck of cards, but I'm a little stuck as to where to go from here. Suggestions are always welcome.
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Petey Cook
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Join date: Dec 2005
688 IQ
Why does it have to go anywhere? A few tweaks and this is a pretty decent piece as is.

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