Rokkstar
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2011
1,773 IQ
#1
First and foremost... This song has been posted before... Second and secondmost... I have successfully finished recording this track with vocals and guitars and drums... etc etc etc... You can find it right here! So if you guys like it... Please like the Facebook page and try to share it with your friends, too, if you can!

I'll give you guys crits back!
Attachments:
[01] 5 00am.gp5
[01] 5 00am.gp4
[01] 5 00am.mid
Last edited by Rokkstar at Sep 21, 2012,
TheBigProjekt
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Join date: Jun 2009
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#2
I'll start by saying I've always been a fan of yours and you have some really damn catchy lyrics and melodies. Anyway, listening..

Really simple lead, but really catchy to start it off, haha. You always have good drum beats, too, really nice. Typical chorus from you, so bright and happy and just overall fun sounding. Verse and chorus again, still good and stuck in my head. I really like the bridge, when the vocals and drums come in it sounds awesome. I also like how you lead into the chorus, that's such a massive buildup. I like the outro as well, just hope that the crowd sings along with you!

Awesome piece, I wouldn't expect any less out of you!

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Erra93
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Join date: Nov 2009
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#3
Far too tired to write a crit, so I'll just say this: you've done a great job and I'm really looking forward to hear the full recorded song!
Erra93
erriuyai
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#6
Great job on the recording! Been listening to it over and over again for a while now, hah
Rokkstar
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Join date: Feb 2011
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#8
Thanks for liking it guys, but really, I was intending to give you guys critiques back for checking it out! :3 Haha... So that is still up for grabs... If you guys check it out, I'll exchange critiques... >.> That's what this forum's for. haha.

But bundles of thanks and joy for positive feedback!!