treborillusion
UG Fanatic
Join date: May 2009
3,126 IQ
#1
Apathy is bliss Miss
Give me a kiss
Or not, I'm out dated
Not rated anymore
I'm a freaking
Dinosaur; Well like
Just like the escourt said to the client after money was paid and, phone calls were made;

"Let's get started."

Unrequited
Love is just
Lust that's a
Crush
This possession
Obsession
Is unjust
Tell me
Who you can trust
In a world where
Sometimes
Your weed is just dust
I'm not saying it's tough
Or that I've had enough
Just, what the fuzz is it
all about?
Quote by laid-to-waste
look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.
Petey Cook
UG Newbie
Join date: Dec 2005
688 IQ
#2
Forget your oh-so-clever small-line wordplay. Right this out, using the language of the piece, as standard sentences with standard punctuation and let me know if it makes sense. After you do that, we'll see.

- Pete
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