#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p1ZDc96JlJ8

I'm a fan of this guys playing, so I was learning some of his licks in this video. Does the way I have this one tremlo picking lick at 1:04ish tabbed out sound right? Just wanted a second opinion.

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#2
thats for you to decide, everyone on this planet hears the same notes,

if it sounds right,
its right.
I still like Dream Theater