zymn
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Join date: Mar 2009
653 IQ
#1
This is a very personal song... A summary of what happened to me last Friday. Music is my way of dealing with my problems and this reflects that completely. I don't know if it's complete crap or barely listenable, but it's something I felt I needed to do.

http://soundcloud.com/sandpaper-screw/the-end-of-my-life
Skint Out
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Join date: Jan 2012
288 IQ
#3
Sounds awfully rough round the edges man, It sounds ok but some parts sound like you just made it up on the spot such as 1.49 and 3.05.

The lead melody doesn't sound right in parts and they need revising.

The vocal melody is spot on, don't like the long long long long long lyrics, but that's just my personal preference.

Just my 2 pence
RHDIII
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Join date: Jan 2006
1,131 IQ
#4
good shit dude, just keep making songs and working, the emotion and feeling is all there.

lead guitar is fishy but **** that its cool
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Greendaz
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Join date: Oct 2009
1,677 IQ
#5
That play you uploaded really is not fair for you. Cause if you work it, it 'll be a nice song. Plus your voice is nice as long as you work on it...