Sounds pretty good. I find the lack of percussions interesting. I'd add more shredding at the end just for a more violent contrast. Also the final part sounds very improvised, maybe if you worked on it a little more.





holy shit...that sounds a lot like something i recorded a while ago...
other than that, it sounds nice, but yeah, i agree on the last part, sounds a little 'too crowded' maybe less notes or something...
Thanks! I agree with you both, I recorded this at 3 in the morning so I wasn't really 100%. I decided to stick with the end cause I liked how the late note sounded.
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