i am the bassplayer of a new german alternative/pop-punk band (can't really say what kind of music we play) called "4PINS", and we decided to record our first song, and i'd like to get some critics on it, may it be the song itself or the mix - its the first time we recorded ourselfs.

you can listen to the song here on soundcloud:

i'd be glad to comment on songs of yours for a critic


Last edited by thunderhans at Oct 6, 2012,
Definitely very pop-like if that's what you're going for. I liked (What i think is) the synths in the background. They fit the song nicely. The vocals are perfect for this type of music. The song wasn't the most original thing though and didn't really have any memorable moments to it. Kind of bland. The mix seemed fine, but I'm a real novice when it comes to that so I'm not completely sure.

If you could critic back https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1564549
thanks for the feedback!
i added a video we made for the song, any feedback to that would also be appriciated