#1
Hey guys, just throwing this one out there for critiques. I'm quite new to writing post-rock/metal but I think I'm progressing fairly well, the prevailing thing about this song may be the fact that it sounds repetitive in places but honestly, repetition and subtle evolution of the song structure was what I was going for

The title doesn't mean anything really, just the fact that I was listening to East Hastings by Godspeed You Black Emperor when I got the vibe to write a song like this. Let me know what you think, and as always all critiques will be returned.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=uOAwIw__V28

or

http://soundcloud.com/mark-lyell/east-sussex