danielthemaniel
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2012
43 IQ
#1
Flashing lights have paralyzed my brain
Made me happy, kept me sane
Flashing lights they gave me will to live
Built me up and drained me like a sieve

Mother dearest
Don't you worry, I
I just need to alone
Brother, sister,
Can't remember, I
I just want to be alone

Flashing lights have tied me to the Earth
Woke me up and showed me all I'm worth
Flashing lights will one day shine again
I don't know how I will live 'til then

Mother dearest
Don't you worry, I
I just need to alone
Brother, sister,
Can't remember, I
I just want to be alone
Dæmönika
Mortal Technique
Join date: Mar 2006
4,190 IQ
#2
The similes were weak and exist only to act as a rhyme for the preceding/succeeding line. Third line "gave me a will..." Also, I have no idea what these flashing lights are, but they sound exotic. Maybe some clarification on what these lights are or what they represent could flesh out this song.