treborillusion
UG Fanatic
Join date: May 2009
3,126 IQ
#1
Numb numb nom on this
Milk for your chocolate chips
Jumping on my pogo stick
Bags of candy make me sick

In this jungle gym I live
Girls and boys play like this
Fun is for everyone
Fun fun fun fun
Quote by laid-to-waste
look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.
Mr.Pink101
Ribbed for her pleasure
Join date: Feb 2008
1,508 IQ
#3
This made me smile.

I particulaly like the deep metaphorical commentary on the political tension between India and Pakistan in that first stanza, higher order intelligence sir.
Music is an art form that celebrates potential. So long as you're looking for it, you'll always find it.
Nilchii
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2009
867 IQ
#5
How about "Fun for everybody is" to keep with your pointlessly inverted word order in line five? Alternately, "I live in this jungle gym" keeps the facile rhyme scheme intact without injecting the pointlessly inverted word order.

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treborillusion
UG Fanatic
Join date: May 2009
3,126 IQ
#6
Quote by #1 synth

You mean we could embed youtube videos? on UG...

It's like Christmas.
Quote by laid-to-waste
look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.